Trees

Posted on November 17, 2010 | 17 Comments

Soothing winds creating the dins
That flow through the poplar leaves

Soaking up sun and having fun
With the worshiping by the trees

You hear the sigh up in the sky
As the wind goes everywhere

Stir the branches all big and small
With a whisper of clean fresh air

They bend and sway and seem to say
Glory to the one up above

Perched from flight and out of clear sight
Are the homes to the loving doves

http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2012/01/poetry-picnic-week-22-spring-colors.html

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17 responses to “Trees”

Eileen O'Neill | November 19, 2010 at 2:07 PM | Reply

Michael,
I am visiting your poetry blog, via Poets United.
I really liked the words in your poem Trees. I could feel the breeze and see the sway, with the imagery created from your words.

Welcome to Poets United.
Best wishes, Eileen

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- booguloo | November 19, 2010 at 3:14 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks for stopping by. I’m glad you liked it.
  Michael
  
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charlesmashburn | January 15, 2012 at 5:08 PM | Reply

Nicely done, Michael. Your words describe the scene and bring it to life.

Five: Death in the Spring

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 10:05 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Charles
  
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~L | January 16, 2012 at 8:57 AM | Reply

“They bend and sway and seem to say
Glory to the one up above”

This was a beautiful poem, and amazing picture and that line above I copied and pasted was very powerful!

~L

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 10:06 AM | Reply
  
  Glad you enjoyed it.
  
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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 10:36 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks so much.
  
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leah J. Lynn | January 16, 2012 at 9:32 AM | Reply

Lovely, poem ” Whisper of clean fresh air” like the line.

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 10:37 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Leah.
  
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Becky Sain | January 16, 2012 at 9:57 AM | Reply

Really like this!
Trees gently swaying… love that feeling.

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 10:38 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks for the visit and comment.
  
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Kellie Elmore | January 16, 2012 at 12:34 PM | Reply

the sounds of the breeze and cooing of doves and the imagery of sunlight and sky! altogether a magical piece! I love it Michael!!! xox

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 1:17 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks Kellie.
  
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Natalie Sunflowers | January 16, 2012 at 5:16 PM | Reply

lovely thoughts on trees.

your imagination is amazing.

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- booguloo | January 16, 2012 at 8:10 PM | Reply
  
  Appreciate that.
  
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Taylor | January 20, 2012 at 11:42 AM | Reply

trees are cool,
so do you.

lovely entry, thanks for sharing.

🙂

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- booguloo | January 20, 2012 at 5:50 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks Taylor.
  
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