So big a message in such few words! Lovely done! Thanks for the visit to my blog, sorry I couldn’t get back to you earlier! Have wonderful Christmas holidays!
Thanks for your kind words. I looked up Tanka, as I’m new to writing poetry, and found it looked like something I might try. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Michael
Mmm, nothing like the lullaby of the ocean waves…lovely, soothing image in this haiku. Would that it weren’t winter, I think I’d run right out for a swim…
Cool..
great imagination..
and a lovely haiku 🙂
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Thank you.
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Excellent haiku. Hard to get such depth in so few words. I liked it a lot. Hope all is well,
crb.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Doing well; the water on this end is cool and refreshing. 😉
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stunning writing..
Happy Tuesday!
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i like that you lure waves from the ocean…nice
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That’s how fishermen roll. ..smile..
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Love the calmness of this!
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While in the Navy, I always tried to get an outer bulkhead rack; To listen the water as the ship cut through the waves.
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So big a message in such few words! Lovely done! Thanks for the visit to my blog, sorry I couldn’t get back to you earlier! Have wonderful Christmas holidays!
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Thank you for the kind words. We’re open 24 hours a day so feel free to stop in anytime. ..smiles..
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and me as well just imagining it…
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I’m glad you liked it.
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Yes, that is how I feel about water…a beautiful lullabye.
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Water is our life’s blood, so to speak. ..smiles..
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Lovely haiku.
Though shorter, I personally find haiku much more difficult than tanka.
This was a very successful haiku.
Lady Nyo
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Thanks for your kind words. I looked up Tanka, as I’m new to writing poetry, and found it looked like something I might try. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Michael
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waves “Lured from the ocean today”…what a beautiful image…unexpected 🙂
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Thanks again.
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nice work – I enjoyed it.
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Thanks Ollie!
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It’s Wednesday night here and I’m listening to the waves at this very moment. Nice haiku..Best wishes for Christmas!
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And to you. I enjoyed you blog.
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It’s so simple, I feel I’m in a small boat, moving to the rhythm of the sea. Lovely.
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Isn’t that one of the best feelings in the world? Glad you stopped by.
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Mmm, nothing like the lullaby of the ocean waves…lovely, soothing image in this haiku. Would that it weren’t winter, I think I’d run right out for a swim…
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Yeah I don’t get why people like to jump into arctic waters for fun. brr Thanks for the comments!
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