Senryu Three

16 responses to “Senryu Three”

1. Steve Isaak | January 18, 2011 at 12:03 PM | Reply

   LOL clever.

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   • booguloo | January 18, 2011 at 12:43 PM | Reply

     Thanks! Just covering my bases.

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2. gracefulglider | January 18, 2011 at 2:48 PM | Reply

   lovely written Senryu,

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   • booguloo | January 18, 2011 at 3:05 PM | Reply

     Always appreciate your visits and comments. Thanks.

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3. cesar gealogo | January 18, 2011 at 5:06 PM | Reply

   That’s what i like in senryu, you only says a few words but the meaning is deep. Your three lines poem says a lot. Good day always

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   • booguloo | January 18, 2011 at 5:14 PM | Reply

     Thanks Cesar. Gratitude given and accepted.

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4. Mama Zen | January 18, 2011 at 6:02 PM | Reply

   Very cool!

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   • booguloo | January 18, 2011 at 6:21 PM | Reply

     Thanks. Gratitude accepted and given! ..smiles..

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5. tattytiara | January 18, 2011 at 7:16 PM | Reply

   I liked that a lot. I was wishing I could find words to describe why, but then it occurred to me that part of the pleasure was not being able to pinpoint any particular reason.

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   • booguloo | January 18, 2011 at 7:43 PM | Reply

     Thanks.. Gratitude accepted and given. Don’t forget to send me that interplanetary coach ticket.. ..smiles..

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6. deadpoet88 | January 18, 2011 at 11:04 PM | Reply

   Very cleverly written. Great poem!

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   • booguloo | January 19, 2011 at 12:24 PM | Reply

     Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting.

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7. williewizzy | January 19, 2011 at 5:29 AM | Reply

   Nicely done.

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   • booguloo | January 19, 2011 at 12:16 PM | Reply

     Thanks Willie.

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8. Sarah | January 19, 2011 at 3:10 PM | Reply

   I love this poem. It’s as if you can be willing to say everything but there’s something outside the scope of “everything” that can’t be said. Beautiful.

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   • booguloo | January 20, 2011 at 9:22 AM | Reply

     I was trying to have some fun with an “any mouse” reader who thought I was being acerbic.

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