Senryu Four

A deserter’s heartDeserters
Forever seeks redemption
Mistake from the start

© 2011 Michael Yost

Inspired by Alegria Imperial, “Deserter”

10 responses to “Senryu Four

  1. Wow!!! Thanks, Michael…terrific senryu! Indeed, inspiration is contagious.


  2. Love this…so simple yet extremely thought provoking…


  3. Powerful senryu. A desperate scene.


  4. wow… too intense too….
    but lovely 🙂


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