The ruling party requires
Pointed hats and funny attire
Thus is spoken from his sire
Not to comply would be dire
You must have fun or face the fire
Your child’s broom will sweep the pyre
Ash on their head we’ll admire
Now laugh, have fun and inspire
Β© 2011 Michael Yost
http://www.flickr.com/photos/shellysblogger/4909096559/
Potluck Week 19 Theme: Rules, regulations, and law
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Haha! Lovely! The image has me in a commission hearing of some sort, but the picture punctures that! Very nice!
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You got to play by the rules. ..smiles..
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Love this one and the rhythm of it. =)
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Thanks Kenia! Gratitude accepted and given.
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profound piece.
eloquent and effective.
A++
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Thanks Ji!
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Wow – this is superb π
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Glad you liked it!
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Very nice piece. Playful and rhythmic. Kudos!
Happy Potluck! Here’s my piece
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/searching/
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Thanks for the visit and the comments.. Liked yours too!
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Funny and cute! Happy potluck!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
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Appreciate the comments!
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love love loved this π
here’s my pieces:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/the-pages/
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/15/sonnet-vi/
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/23/its-a-wonder-fuckin-life/
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K.. ..smiles..
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I especially liked the last line…very fun poem to read.
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Thanks David.. Gratitude accepted and given.
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Lovely rhyme and flow.. it made me feel light..
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Try to hit all the emotions. The ones that hit me anyway.. Gratitude accepted and given.
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Haha. Another great picture for your playful words. I really liked this one. I wish the “man in charge” wore a pointy hat & funny attire. π
My Potluck poem: Greenzilla’s Top 5 Green Deeds
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He does! Gotta close your eyes just right.. ..smiles..
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well, you made me laugh π
Trisha
http://Mydomainpvt.wordpress.com
Mine:
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/20/free-soul-20th-jan-2011/
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Awesome one, Michael!! Fun by the rules, eh!??! heheheh…what an irony!!
Quite a thought provoking poem, really! Loved it!! So relatable too!
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Thanks for the visit! Rules are fun when I make them! ..smiles..
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I love rhymes, and this is a good one!
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Me too.. I can rhyme on dime.. this time.. Smiles..
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