The blaze filled the night time skyMountain fairies rescued the queenWinds loft cinders of souls diedLost hope growing as her scream
© 2011 Michael Yost
Jonas Gerard Art Gallery
Friday Poetically
nice…you packed an epic into few lines…hope growing as her scream…wow….nicely done.
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Thanks, B. Me and short go well together!
i like this…. your words are like a quick jab to the conscious… it leaves the reader mourning. Great job
Gratitude accepted and given.
A whole kingdom lost in four lines–and beautifully done too. You might be the master of short, Michael.
Mountain fairies rescued the queen…how cool is that?! love this michael – excellent take on the prompt – we were both choosing the same pic
Trying to stay true to the prompt (This one was a difficult one). Same prompt.. two different kinds of heat. ..smiles..
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nice…you packed an epic into few lines…hope growing as her scream…wow….nicely done.
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Thanks, B. Me and short go well together!
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i like this…. your words are like a quick jab to the conscious… it leaves the reader mourning. Great job
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Gratitude accepted and given.
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A whole kingdom lost in four lines–and beautifully done too. You might be the master of short, Michael.
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Mountain fairies rescued the queen…how cool is that?! love this michael – excellent take on the prompt – we were both choosing the same pic
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Trying to stay true to the prompt (This one was a difficult one). Same prompt.. two different kinds of heat. ..smiles..
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