But I Feel Remorse

Posted on March 12, 2011 | 6 Comments

It’s ok, I feel remorseExecution
My sins are washed away
Come you have no recourse
Someone else gladly paid

Let loose the bonds binding
See how good you will feel
Visualize unwinding
Before the clock does peal

Hood is hot and itches
My breath makes me sick
How about last wishes
What were those last clicks..

© 2011 Michael Yost
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6 responses to “But I Feel Remorse”

  1. Bodhirose | March 12, 2011 at 1:37 PM | Reply

    I guess he’s getting “done”…

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  2. kolembo | March 14, 2011 at 2:18 AM | Reply

    Oh fabulous. I have to admit, I read it entirely differently…only when I re-read the 2nd stanza did I finally get the claustrophobia of the hood.

    Very nice.

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  3. Jamie Dedes | March 14, 2011 at 11:49 AM | Reply

    Ditto your last response to a comment.

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