Mutual Mutability

Posted on March 27, 2011 | 20 Comments

Is it mutual
Do we know
Is it factual

Is it so
Take my hand
And let us go

Up the hills
Down the valleys
Hold on tight
Through dark alleys

Let’s say it mutual
Let us know
Make it factual

Make it so
Take my hand
And let us go

Travel far
Show we know
Embrace the stars
As we grow

http://www.flickr.com/photos/wattsbw2004/2742930107/

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20 responses to “Mutual Mutability”

Rhyme Me a Smile | March 27, 2011 at 8:26 AM | Reply

That picture fits the image created by your words so well! 🙂

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- booguloo | March 27, 2011 at 8:44 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Rach! It was fun.
  
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Olivia | March 27, 2011 at 1:29 PM | Reply

Absolutely beautiful! Was this posted for Potluck or is it a co- incidence..?

I loved the word flow.. and for once, can I come along with you..? It seems a lot fun.. 🙂

Hugs xx

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- booguloo | March 27, 2011 at 4:49 PM | Reply
  
  Haven’t posted it so it must be a co inky dink. Having some fun and trying to get the nerve.
  
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Jingle | March 27, 2011 at 5:30 PM | Reply

this is lovely,

your humor is as good as your poetry.

keep it up.

see you at potluck hopefully…
🙂

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lunawitch15 | March 28, 2011 at 4:38 AM | Reply

Very Nice! your words flow like a stream ! really liked this!

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 4:53 AM | Reply
  
  Good, Let your mare and yourself get a drink! smiles..
  
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bendedspoon | March 28, 2011 at 5:59 AM | Reply

holding someone’s hand along the journey is comforting. the poem and photo are perfect fit. love it! 🙂

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 10:25 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks. Liked your’s as well.
  
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David (1MereMortal) | March 28, 2011 at 6:28 AM | Reply

“Travel far
Show we know
Embrace the stars
As we grow”

One of the best journeys to take. Very nice poem.

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koatmeal | March 28, 2011 at 10:29 AM | Reply

I like the repetition. Well done.

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 10:38 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks for stopping by Katie!
  
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Jingle | March 28, 2011 at 10:39 AM | Reply

very enjoyable ride in your words.

A++

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 10:42 AM | Reply
  
  Glad you liked it.
  
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KRM | March 28, 2011 at 11:16 AM | Reply

I eased right through this. The pace was smooth and comfortable. The repetition brought the senses back around and around. like wheels turning on a journey.

Thanks for stopping by my page to comment. I’m slightly nervous about posting my work in such a large and talented community of poets. Your kind words eased a bit of that anxiety.

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 1:55 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks K. You keep pushing poems out like you have been you’ll have a subscriber base that won’t quit!
  
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fiveloaf | March 28, 2011 at 11:58 AM | Reply

great michael- just great! and thaks for coming by..

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- booguloo | March 28, 2011 at 1:54 PM | Reply
  
  Trying for a light one for a change.
  
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Bodhirose | April 1, 2011 at 7:43 PM | Reply

Aw, this is sweet–it feels good to have someone to be “mutual” with.

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- booguloo | April 3, 2011 at 9:01 AM | Reply
  
  I’m with you mutually! smiles
  
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