The feelings are real and unspoken true
Fearing what I do have, will be lost too
Words aren’t important as showing is
I’ll let the angels sing the choruses
Your last love abused before I knew you
Causing you caution I understand too
Standing over here not too far away
To fill whatever role I need to play
© 2011 Michael Yost
“I’ll let the angels sing the choruses…” Lovely thought, even if you don’t celebrate Easter! This was a wonderful take on the Angel prompt, and I liked it a lot. Thanks, Michael, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/04/23/late-at-night-a-shadorma/
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Thank Amy. Have a great Easter!
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“Words aren’t important as showing is”
Someone I love and hate said something just like this.
great poem.
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Don’t we all know that dual emotional summit. Glad you stopped by.
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wow! how sweet! a rare find, someone willing to work through past demons, totally sweet!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/24/the-corridors-of-supposition/
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We do what we have to do sometimes. Smiles..
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We al spend much time and effort on love and hate don’t we. Well expressed.
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The human spirit’s greatest emotions do get some playing time. Thanks for stopping by.
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We do carry past relationships into present ones, and fear is so hard to escape. Nicely expressed, Michael.
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This one is so real in a lot of relationships I’m familiar with. Thanks for saying.
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bless your heart.
good luck on everything, you deserve happiness,
smiles.
🙂
A++
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Thanks Jingle!
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Hurrah for sensitive men. Who write poetry no less.
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All men are sensitive. Go ahead and laugh and point… lol
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To wish upon a star, shining bright, sharing, showing, lending a tender touch.
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Thanks.
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Oh! What a wonderful write. I think a lot of people can relate to this, although I have to say it’s rare to find someone so open-minded. You must truly care about the other person to be so selfless.
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Thanks for the comments and the visit.
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Nice poem, a smooth read with a sensative side. Thanks for sharing, really enjoyed the meaning and thoughts here.
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Thank you Gwen, I appreciate your comments and visit.
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Sad when we can’t go with the flow of love. The present always suffer because of the past — if we take the ghost with us. Great write as usual 🙂
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Those ghosts are like cobwebs, clinging to every open crevice. (the begining of a new poem.. smiles..)
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You had me with this one Mike!
I wish I had someone saying this to me.. I am cautioned- almost alarmed forever! Very beautifully expressed.. 🙂
Hugs x
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You may already have and he feels the same as this poet does in this piece. I believe we all have a secret love at every corner of of life’s turns.
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sweet… just sweet! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/13/a-chinese-love-story/
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Thank you sir!
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Heartfelt and very sweet– nicely done.
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Thanks! Happy you had a great holiday!
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Angels singing the choruses for you is adds a poignant touch here. Well done, Michael. Happy Poetry Potluck!
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Thanks again Jamie.
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‘real and unspoken true’ is an enchanting phrase. I stopped for a moment at: Words aren’t important as showing is, as well. A line that could draw out so many different emotions in the readers. Happy Potluck.
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How very respectful and kind of you to “stand over here” and not invade the space that may be needed.
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Smart too. The line of fire is closer… smiles…
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