Lines white and fine
Tiny bridges to the shrine
Big head or dead line
© 2011 Michael Yost
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Michael's Lair 
The second line functions nicely as passage for the initial white “lines” to the more prominent ones with that twist of wordplay at the end. Well penned Senryu.
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You too have a way with words… whether composing or critiquing.
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ha, love that last line…nicely played senryu
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Thanks Bri. Liked your version of Depeche Mode too!
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Nice twist at the end 🙂
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Makes for good copy eh? smiles…
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