Love’s Spark

Posted on May 29, 2011 | 21 Comments

As she sheds the layers of her heart

Laying aside fear finding love’s start

Slicing away to find the spark

Lighting the path out of the dark

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21 responses to “Love’s Spark”

Broken Sparkles | May 29, 2011 at 9:17 AM | Reply

This is beautiful! I can relate to the words, the sparkles …

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 3:41 AM | Reply
  
  We’ll always have a sparkle connection!
  
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Blossom Dreams | May 29, 2011 at 12:35 PM | Reply

Yup – like Broken Sparkles, I can relate to these beautiful words too 😀 xx

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 3:25 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Chloe.
  
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Bodhirose | May 29, 2011 at 2:03 PM | Reply

When we allow ourselves a bit of vulnerability with laying open our hearts, that’s when love can ignite. Lovely.

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 3:24 AM | Reply
  
  It’s been a tough week, but our poetry pulls us out when it can.
  
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Mihir Vatsa | May 29, 2011 at 7:18 PM | Reply

Four lines! Just four lines, and the meaning delivered.

Impressive indeed. Both-the meaning, and the little wonder poem.

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 3:22 AM | Reply
  
  I stand on my tippy toes a lot and short is the only way for some of us.. Big Smile!
  
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ALIVE aLwaYs | May 29, 2011 at 9:12 PM | Reply

very beautiful lines!

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 3:15 AM | Reply
  
  Appreciate the comment and the visit.
  
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Sharp Little Pencil | May 29, 2011 at 9:57 PM | Reply

So hard to think of being that open, that vulnerable, and yet this poem holds the key to possibility. Great poem, Michael. (I can’t believe what you said on my blog about the church ladies and the “crossed legs,” I roared!!)

Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/29/women-woman-2/

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 2:59 AM | Reply
  
  Find the light. Your poem touched a sensitive tooth. Didn’t mean to be so graphic… take that back.. I did.. Envy, strife and gossip pull good churches down.
  
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Ina | May 30, 2011 at 12:52 AM | Reply

Lovely.

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 2:56 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Ina. I’ve been using a tow truck lately to pull them out of me. smiles
  I tried but had trouble with the color scheme on your blog. I did see my favorite cowboy though!
  
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Dakshi | May 30, 2011 at 4:10 AM | Reply

Beautiful, as always… 🙂

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 4:22 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks, Dakshi!
  
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Lyn | May 30, 2011 at 7:29 AM | Reply

It pays to take the chance…lovely!

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 1:35 PM | Reply
  
  What a boring and lonely place without a chance.
  
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mindlovemisery | May 30, 2011 at 9:27 AM | Reply

I love the first line. Simply stunning, great submissions!

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- booguloo | May 30, 2011 at 1:33 PM | Reply
  
  I appreciate the visit and the comments. Thank you.
  
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Jingle | May 30, 2011 at 2:01 PM | Reply

clever words.

wow.
bless you.

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