Senryu Thirty Four

Posted on June 14, 2011 | 9 Comments

Whispers wander free

Their lips the lies they deceive

In front of you, please

 

© 2011 Michael Yost

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9 responses to “Senryu Thirty Four”

  1. Reese Smith | June 14, 2011 at 1:33 PM | Reply

    simple, yet powerful. i love it!

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  2. TheMsLvh | June 15, 2011 at 8:29 AM | Reply

    so much said, with so few words. Great!

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  3. carefreewanderer | June 15, 2011 at 10:39 AM | Reply

    Words packed with wisdom.This is just lovely!

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  4. Blossom Dreams | June 15, 2011 at 1:43 PM | Reply

    So much said in so few words – love the imagery you’ve created too xx

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  5. Luke Prater | June 16, 2011 at 1:38 PM | Reply

    interesting haiku/senryu. Like the word-economy

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