Slapping Thighs Goodbye

Posted on June 18, 2011 | 8 Comments

Hilarious to a fault she always grinds
The laughter shared is only in her mind
Nothing she shares goes without her asthma
Where she tends to spread her miasma

This one’s intentional jocularity
Causes real discomfort and irregularity
Every once and a while she’ll stop and breathe
Because the smart ones are getting up ready to leave

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8 responses to “Slapping Thighs Goodbye”

joanny | June 18, 2011 at 11:44 PM | Reply

hilarious , my friend we can always use a good dose of humor in poetry, poetically speaking that is.

jpanny

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- booguloo | June 19, 2011 at 9:24 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Joanny!
  
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dragonkatet | June 19, 2011 at 5:53 PM | Reply

Ooooo what a pointed piece this is! Very well said!

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- booguloo | June 19, 2011 at 6:25 PM | Reply
  
  The world is made up of all kinds. smiles…
  
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Bodhirose | June 20, 2011 at 12:49 PM | Reply

Just reading this brought up a strong feeling of aversion for her! Yuck…

But very humorous, Michael!

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- booguloo | June 20, 2011 at 12:59 PM | Reply
  
  The laugh goes well beyond a 20 foot pole, so there’s no escape.. lol
  
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Laurie Kolp | June 23, 2011 at 5:01 AM | Reply

Hilarious!

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- booguloo | June 23, 2011 at 7:52 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks for the comment and for stopping by Laurie.
  
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