Pity is a selfish emotion.
Who does it help as it sways like the ocean?
We hang on to it like it’s going to help;
All it does is drag us to the bottom like getting caught in kelp.
© 2011 Michael Yost
*Changed from “Sympathy” to “Pity” based on caring feedback.
Like it alot! Love when we get suggestions!
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This is so true, whether it’s self pity or pity for others. Well poemed, Michael. Thank you!
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It can be a trap. Thanks for the visit and the comments.
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Exactly–it’s just like being caught in kelp! Yikes!
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Scary times for a worthless emotion.
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