Twrees Okay?

Posted on July 9, 2011 | 19 Comments

I spilled the pot I hope the twrees  okay

We were s’posed to plant it today

Maybe we could leaves it this way

Mommy, Mommy do we gots a tray

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/

Week 5 Image Prompt

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19 responses to “Twrees Okay?”

  1. Judith Evans | July 9, 2011 at 7:57 AM | Reply

    Sweet images…love it!

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  2. A.B. Thomas | July 9, 2011 at 8:46 AM | Reply

    I am so happy that I ain’t diabetic – this was a fantastically sugary treat to consume! I’m going to be stuck saying twrees for days now….

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  3. Jinglej | July 9, 2011 at 10:07 AM | Reply

    wow, big grins, you are talented.
    love the playfulness.

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  4. thingy | July 9, 2011 at 12:01 PM | Reply

    LOL. Very pweasing.

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  5. mish | July 10, 2011 at 2:45 AM | Reply

    Fun , original and light-hearted take on the prompt !!

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  6. mindlovemisery | July 10, 2011 at 2:46 AM | Reply

    Awww this is so sweet =)

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  7. christine | July 10, 2011 at 11:51 AM | Reply

    Love the voice in this, very sweet.

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  8. lolamouse | July 10, 2011 at 3:58 PM | Reply

    Awwww….I can just hear this one in my head. You got it just right!

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  9. Jamie Dedes | July 12, 2011 at 6:47 PM | Reply

    Light. Uplifting. Smile.

    Thank you! A nice one to digest with my dinner. 🙂

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