The cynical nature of romantic love
Truly an over emphasized emotion
Written everywhere by everyone
Whoever had loved and then lost
A cycle of ups and downs that
That is always carrying you
Past life with only one concern
Them and their happiness above your own
So we sacrifice beyond what we are able
Finally to the point where you are exhausted
Or you find a reciprocal soul giving back
Good luck with that
Then the romance is gone either way
But then you may find happiness
Unless you fall into the hole of
The cynical nature of romantic love
© 2011 Michael Yost
I enjoyed the flow and sense of the poem.
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Appreciate the comment and the visit.
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Definitely a cynical look at love which is fleeting certainly in the first rush.
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Thanks for the comment and the visit. Always nice to see a new face.
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i’m addicted to love & can definitely connect to these words. you always amaze me. thanks for sharing 🙂
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Your visit means a lot. Come back when you need a fix! lol
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youryour words are true. Guess we are all looking for that co called soul mate. words are true. Guess we are all looking for that co called soul mate.
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One that gives back would be nice for a change. lol
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Oh how I love that the first line is the last line as well! Loved the flow of this! Great post my friend:)
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the visit and the comment.
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Love your poem. I am definitely on the cynical side of the fence. Am definitely one of the ones who gave too much. Never seemed to get that whole mysterious thing called “romantic love” to fit. Now I am working on leaning “unconditional love.” That is even harder but the journey is easier and the rewards greater. As always, your poetry delights me. Hugs, pat
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Thanks, Pat!
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is that a cycle that many of us get pulled into and through???
Your poetry does hit it
I still believe in romantic love cant afford to be cynical
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I think it is. I think when it becomes lopsided someone needs to recognize it quickly so as not to cause too much pain.
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agreed,
well done.
🙂
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Thanks!
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