Risking Wishes

Posted on August 4, 2011 | 12 Comments

Lovers two cradled crying, infantile desires
Serenading wishes rising through the choirs
Each others expectations, pricked by the briar
Finally recognizing the other was a liar

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12 responses to “Risking Wishes”

TheMsLvh | August 4, 2011 at 5:48 PM | Reply

And so the truth was known….you got me with “Finally recognizing the other was a liar”.
Very creative!

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- booguloo | August 4, 2011 at 7:05 PM | Reply
  
  After watching family and friends over the years, I was really surprised at all the hidden agendas people pull on one another when the smoke finally cleared on broken relationships.
  
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The Brave | August 5, 2011 at 7:01 AM | Reply

Hmmm, really like the flow and rythmn of this. The last line really nails it.

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- booguloo | August 5, 2011 at 7:27 AM | Reply
  
  I appreciate the visit and comment. Glad you enjoyed it.
  
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antomaniax | August 6, 2011 at 3:54 AM | Reply

I just love short poetry..Its awesome!

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- booguloo | August 6, 2011 at 7:08 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks for the visit and the comments. I love short poetry as well.
  
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Dakshi | August 8, 2011 at 8:11 PM | Reply

You always amazes me, with your creativity.
Lovely….

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- booguloo | August 9, 2011 at 6:56 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks Dakshi.
  
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Reese S. | August 9, 2011 at 12:04 PM | Reply

LOVE

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- booguloo | August 9, 2011 at 1:02 PM | Reply
  
  Could be, but not always.
  
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Fountains | August 18, 2011 at 8:14 AM | Reply

Wowzers. This was good. Very unique expressions.

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- booguloo | August 18, 2011 at 12:17 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks fountains.
  
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