Risking Wishes

Lovers two cradled crying, infantile desires
Serenading wishes rising through the choirs
Each others expectations, pricked by the briar
Finally recognizing the other was a liar

© 2011 Michael Yost

12 responses to “Risking Wishes

  1. And so the truth was known….you got me with “Finally recognizing the other was a liar”.
    Very creative!


    • After watching family and friends over the years, I was really surprised at all the hidden agendas people pull on one another when the smoke finally cleared on broken relationships.


  2. Hmmm, really like the flow and rythmn of this. The last line really nails it.


  3. I just love short poetry..Its awesome!


  4. You always amazes me, with your creativity.


  5. LOVE


  6. Wowzers. This was good. Very unique expressions.


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