Haiku 13

Posted on December 22, 2011 | 20 Comments

Sand covered my face
Tumbling on the white warm beach
Clowning as I rolled

© 2011 Michael Yost

http://purpletreehouse.blogspot.com/2011/07/poetic-forms-classic-haiku.html

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20 responses to “Haiku 13”

  1. Morning | December 22, 2011 at 6:43 PM | Reply

    vivid imagery, wow.

    Glad to see you write one and share.

    have a fun holiday.

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  3. kaykuala | December 22, 2011 at 8:06 PM | Reply

    booguloo,
    Thanks for your no. of visits lately. Great haiku!

    Hank

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  4. Susie Clevenger | December 22, 2011 at 10:30 PM | Reply

    Sounds like so much fun…great haiku

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  5. Kay Salady | December 23, 2011 at 3:05 AM | Reply

    Very sweet! I like this.

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  6. Mihir Vatsa | December 23, 2011 at 6:52 AM | Reply

    Clowning as I rolled! Haha. Nice one there Michael!

    Merry Christmas!

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  7. Natalie | December 23, 2011 at 1:37 PM | Reply

    sand has huge impact when they cover your face and have to roll.

    simply love the vivid imagery your words strike.

    🙂

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  8. terri0729 | December 28, 2011 at 10:50 AM | Reply

    Lovely Michael!!!! peace, love, joy and many blessings in the new year, Terri

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  9. sfederle | December 28, 2011 at 5:32 PM | Reply

    I love this… but the last line is my favorite!

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  10. Snowflakes | December 29, 2011 at 11:13 AM | Reply

    the imagery is vivid and powerful.

    🙂

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