For http://www.Trifectawritingchallenge.com prompt this week, we are giving you the first 33 words of a story. You need to complete it with 33 of your own words. This weekend’s Trifextra is community-judged.
“There’s nothing cute about it,” he said. The register of his voice indicated decision more so than discussion. She disagreed heartily and privately, staring past his head and out the window behind him.
Townspeople had a contest of prominent people’s baby pictures in the newspaper for a Nursery fund raiser. His mother submitted his photo of him naked lying on his stomach. John won belly down.
Hah! That’ll show him!
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Plus, since he’s belly-down, it won’t show them!
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Smiles..
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Yes it will. lol
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belly down – 🙂 love this, Michael
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Thanks Barbara.
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At least he was belly down, haha! This is great. 😉
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I thought I’d give him that much dignity. smile
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So funny! That should prevent him from having any airs. Oopss, no pun intended.
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Was that no bun intended?
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Now that is cute!
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Let me hope cute really cuts it.
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Nice take on the prompt!
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Thanks Nicole. Appreciate the visit and comment.
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“Belly down” — great word choices, and great idea!
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Thanks Millie!
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Of all the responses I’ve read so far, this is the best yet!
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Gratitude accepted and given.
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Yay!! Revenge of the moms. 🙂
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They do it all the time too. smile
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Definitely cute, from a mom’s point of view!
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Cute.
Or rather. Maybe not, depending on who is looking at it.
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I know John didn’t think so, but what’s a mother for if not to give you as much trouble as you gave her. At least that’s what my mom alluded to.
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Haha!! I have many many pictures of my son that will be pulled out for the purposes of humiliating him at his wedding. He’s four now. So he’s got many MORE years to make me other photo moments with which to terrorize him in later years.
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I can see the imp behind your eyes! Enjoy yourself. smile
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Hahaha!!! I like where you took this!
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Yeah now John wants to take his buns on the run.
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Great piece! I love when the author is able to get a beginning, middle, end out of so few words. Well played!
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Thanks Kim.
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Of course a mother thinks that’s cute….boy do I have some pictures of my sons waiting for just the right time… 😆 (only kidding)
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I see you hiding there.. I bet you’ll do it. lol
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Very funny. And really, why not. Take him down a peg. Sweet.
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Under the guise of a good deed. lol
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Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so I hope you were able to cast your votes. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.
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I was too late to vote.
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Very funny! Hope he was just a wee bit embarrassed!
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In my scenario he was. smile
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