Pushing past the melody
The words absorbing my soul
Billowing full of buoyancy
Awareness does extol
Replacing angst with calming
Opens the ears of the blind
Hearing eyes weeping seeing
All my senses intertwined
© 2011 Michael Yost
http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/03/one-shot-poetry-wednesday-week-39.html#comment-8261
You know what I like about poetry — it can move the soul, shift a mood, and get someone to stop and listen. It is quite beautiful. Especially when all three tasks are accomplished, such as they are in this piece.
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I just wish I could critique as well as you do; then I’d be happier than any camper.
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carry me along…lift me up…that is what your words do today…smiles.
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I love music, but lyrics last lifetimes.
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Flowing and dreamingly done……………. floating already!!
Love xx
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Appreciate the comments and the love!
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