Release

Posted on August 13, 2011 | 15 Comments

So many emotions to try and sort out
Those you’ve loved left you hanging in doubt
Refusing to hear you nor your lamented shouts
Leaving your thoughts within and your emotions without

© 2011 Michael Yost

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15 responses to “Release”

  1. TheMsLvh | August 13, 2011 at 9:11 PM | Reply

    Ahhh! Good one! Right on the mark.

    Refusing to hear you nor your lamented shouts
    Leaving your thoughts within and your emotions without

    Excellent Mike

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  2. Mary | August 14, 2011 at 9:26 AM | Reply

    Sometimes there seems to be too much going on in one’s mind. When that happens to me, sometimes I just get out and take a walk with the dog to clear all the cobwebs!

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  4. Life: Between the lines | August 14, 2011 at 7:02 PM | Reply

    yeah, sometimes those you want around aren’t there sadly enough 😦

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  5. luna15 | August 15, 2011 at 10:46 AM | Reply

    wonderful and emotional

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  6. Morning | August 16, 2011 at 8:07 AM | Reply

    amazing, your interview is posted at Jingle Poetry Blog,

    check it out today.

    🙂

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  7. charlesmashburn | August 18, 2011 at 11:17 AM | Reply

    Another good one, Mike. Tears at the heart.

    Here’s another one I posted this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

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  8. Jamie Dedes | August 19, 2011 at 5:56 AM | Reply

    Too sad and the sort of thing that happens too often.

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