Senryu Seventeen

Posted on February 14, 2011 | 9 Comments

Were my tears golden
My children would never need
But never fulfilled

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Steve Isaak | February 14, 2011 at 11:11 AM | Reply

Good, yearning work.

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dragonkatet | February 16, 2011 at 9:18 PM | Reply

I really admire those who can do haiku! Well done. 🙂

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Olivia | February 17, 2011 at 10:33 AM | Reply

Wonderful words woven together.. 🙂

May I please invite you to join us for Thursday Poets Rally week 38, where all of your entries are to be fully represented after the collection is over. Link one of your poems via the link below and enjoy encouragements from fellow poets.

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/

Sending you loads of wishes-
from officials at Thursday Poets Rally community
xoxox

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Bodhirose | February 17, 2011 at 11:17 AM | Reply

Oh, so true, Michael. Beautiful…

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Jingle | February 17, 2011 at 11:19 AM | Reply

smart one, well done.
🙂

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trisha | February 23, 2011 at 3:19 AM | Reply

just gorgeous, senryu and the pic.

visiting you from Jingle’s blog,
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/
Happy Rally!

trisha

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Jingle | March 6, 2011 at 9:00 AM | Reply

A++
work keep it up..
😉

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