Time Better Spent

Posted on June 4, 2013 | 8 Comments

Why did you come back today
Hoping to find another way
But I have no answers for you
For finding your own doorway through

Stopping now you start to sink
You’ve seen enough of me think
Keep going and don’t look back
Failures always find your lacks

Future fables will destroy dreams
Nothing ahead is what it seems
Calling my name out in the crowds
Hoping to get above the clouds

Comfort you used to rely on
With crusted snot on was a con
The one piece Teddy she wears now
Gives more comfort if allowed

Prompt 6

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mindlovemisery | June 4, 2013 at 11:32 AM | Reply

Teddy vs Teddy haha I read this poem twice so far, I love the flow and rhyme its so seamless and gorgeous. The ending is fantastic, I admit to having my head in the clouds much too much

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- booguloo | June 8, 2013 at 2:21 AM | Reply
  
  We do have our days…smile, Now If I could bottle or can it I’d be really happy.
  
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lolamouse | June 5, 2013 at 6:24 PM | Reply

I love “Teddy vs Teddy” although seeing myself in a teddy might just send me running for my teddy to cry on!

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Mary Bruce Woods | June 7, 2013 at 8:38 PM | Reply

what kind thoughts here, sweet dreams, keep hoping is a way to continue our life despite sadness.

🙂

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- booguloo | June 8, 2013 at 2:40 AM | Reply
  
  Thank you and here’s hoping your dreams are sweet!
  
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- booguloo | June 11, 2013 at 3:23 PM | Reply
  
  Thanks I try for happiness all the time… it helps when I smile.
  
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nessa1313 | June 8, 2013 at 3:32 AM | Reply

The ending was a nice surprise.

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- booguloo | June 8, 2013 at 8:30 AM | Reply
  
  Thanks for the visit and comments.
  
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